From 445d3a34a6c8841fc0844d05d201ded42725eeaf Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: "Bruce A. Mah" Date: Sun, 11 Apr 2004 23:49:16 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Fix some minor grammar nits. Translators can probably ignore this. --- .../doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.sgml | 20 +++++++++---------- .../en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common/new.sgml | 20 +++++++++---------- 2 files changed, 20 insertions(+), 20 deletions(-) diff --git a/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.sgml b/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.sgml index 8d92daeb338b..498ae3c0420a 100644 --- a/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.sgml +++ b/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.sgml @@ -189,11 +189,11 @@ The &man.ctau.4; driver has been added for Cronyx-Tau synchronous serial adapters. This driver was known for a long time as - ct in its previous life outside &os; source tree. &merged; + ct in its previous life outside the &os; source tree. &merged; The driver name has changed, but the network interface still - has ct name. + has the ct name. @@ -344,7 +344,7 @@ The &man.ng.vlan.4; NetGraph node type, which supports IEEE 802.1Q VLAN tagging has been added. &merged; - A bug, which prevents VLAN support in the &man.nge.4; driver + A bug that prevents VLAN support in the &man.nge.4; driver from working has been fixed. &merged; Several bugs related to &man.polling.4; support @@ -362,7 +362,7 @@ The &man.vr.4; driver now supports &man.polling.4;. - The hardware TX checksum support of the &man.xl.4; driver + The hardware TX checksum support in the &man.xl.4; driver has been disabled as it does not work correctly and slows down the transmission rate. &merged; @@ -485,8 +485,8 @@ &man.bsdlabel.8; now supports a option to work on files instead of disk partitions. - The bthidcontrol and the - bthidd which support Bluetooth + The bthidcontrol command and the + bthidd command, which support Bluetooth HID (Human Interface Device), have been added. The doscmd utility has been @@ -497,7 +497,7 @@ &man.fdread.1; utilities now work on &os;/pc98. The &man.find.1; now supports a option - to locate files with &man.acl.3; + to locate files with &man.acl.3;. &man.indent.1; now supports a option to control indentation of local variables. A number of other @@ -602,17 +602,17 @@ role="package">net/nss_ldap) and groups with large membership lists. - The &man.pgrep.1; and &man.pkill.1;, which come from NetBSD + The &man.pgrep.1; and &man.pkill.1; commands, which come from NetBSD, have been added. They also support a option to extract values associated with the name list from the specified core instead of the default /dev/kmem, and a option to extract the name list from the specified system instead of the default kernel. - &man.ps.1; has been improved in the POSIX/SUSv3 compatibility. + &man.ps.1; compatibility with POSIX/SUSv3 has been improved. The changes include for a list of process IDs, for a list of terminal names, - which is equivalent with , + which is equivalent to , for a list of group IDs, which is the opposite of , and some minor improvements. For more information, see &man.ps.1;. diff --git a/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common/new.sgml b/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common/new.sgml index 8d92daeb338b..498ae3c0420a 100644 --- a/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common/new.sgml +++ b/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common/new.sgml @@ -189,11 +189,11 @@ The &man.ctau.4; driver has been added for Cronyx-Tau synchronous serial adapters. This driver was known for a long time as - ct in its previous life outside &os; source tree. &merged; + ct in its previous life outside the &os; source tree. &merged; The driver name has changed, but the network interface still - has ct name. + has the ct name. @@ -344,7 +344,7 @@ The &man.ng.vlan.4; NetGraph node type, which supports IEEE 802.1Q VLAN tagging has been added. &merged; - A bug, which prevents VLAN support in the &man.nge.4; driver + A bug that prevents VLAN support in the &man.nge.4; driver from working has been fixed. &merged; Several bugs related to &man.polling.4; support @@ -362,7 +362,7 @@ The &man.vr.4; driver now supports &man.polling.4;. - The hardware TX checksum support of the &man.xl.4; driver + The hardware TX checksum support in the &man.xl.4; driver has been disabled as it does not work correctly and slows down the transmission rate. &merged; @@ -485,8 +485,8 @@ &man.bsdlabel.8; now supports a option to work on files instead of disk partitions. - The bthidcontrol and the - bthidd which support Bluetooth + The bthidcontrol command and the + bthidd command, which support Bluetooth HID (Human Interface Device), have been added. The doscmd utility has been @@ -497,7 +497,7 @@ &man.fdread.1; utilities now work on &os;/pc98. The &man.find.1; now supports a option - to locate files with &man.acl.3; + to locate files with &man.acl.3;. &man.indent.1; now supports a option to control indentation of local variables. A number of other @@ -602,17 +602,17 @@ role="package">net/nss_ldap) and groups with large membership lists. - The &man.pgrep.1; and &man.pkill.1;, which come from NetBSD + The &man.pgrep.1; and &man.pkill.1; commands, which come from NetBSD, have been added. They also support a option to extract values associated with the name list from the specified core instead of the default /dev/kmem, and a option to extract the name list from the specified system instead of the default kernel. - &man.ps.1; has been improved in the POSIX/SUSv3 compatibility. + &man.ps.1; compatibility with POSIX/SUSv3 has been improved. The changes include for a list of process IDs, for a list of terminal names, - which is equivalent with , + which is equivalent to , for a list of group IDs, which is the opposite of , and some minor improvements. For more information, see &man.ps.1;.