From c6609fcd7c52dc6b580d7ca5ce2826530dc723cc Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Mike Makonnen Date: Fri, 23 Jan 2004 06:37:19 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] grammar --- sbin/ipfw/ipfw.8 | 12 ++++++------ 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/sbin/ipfw/ipfw.8 b/sbin/ipfw/ipfw.8 index fb31acdaf3a5..138a20f5c65a 100644 --- a/sbin/ipfw/ipfw.8 +++ b/sbin/ipfw/ipfw.8 @@ -790,8 +790,8 @@ and the mask of specified as a dotted quad. As an example, 1.2.3.4/255.0.255.0 will match 1.*.3.*. -We suggest to use this form only for non-contiguous -masks, and resort to the +This form is advised only for non-contiguous +masks. It is better to resort to the .Ar addr Ns / Ns Ar masklen format for contiguous masks, which is more compact and less error-prone. @@ -1539,7 +1539,7 @@ size short or your traffic might be affected by a significant queueing delay. E.g., 50 max-sized ethernet packets (1500 bytes) mean 600Kbit or 20s of queue on a 30Kbit/s pipe. -Even worse effect can result if you get packets from an +Even worse effects can result if you get packets from an interface with a much larger MTU, e.g. the loopback interface with its 16KB packets. .Pp @@ -1782,7 +1782,7 @@ This Section lists the features that have been introduced in .Nm ipfw2 which were not present in .Nm ipfw1 . -We list them in order of the potential impact that they can +They are listed in order of the potential impact that they can have in writing your rulesets. You might want to consider using these features in order to write your rulesets in a more efficient way. @@ -1790,7 +1790,7 @@ write your rulesets in a more efficient way. .It Syntax and flags .Nm ipfw1 does not support the -n flag (only test syntax), -nor it allows spaces after commas or supports all +nor does it allow spaces after commas or support all rule fields in a single argument. .Nm ipfw1 does not allow the -f flag (force) in conjunction with @@ -1823,7 +1823,7 @@ pattern will always fail on them, and the operator will make this rule into a pass-all. .It Addresses .Nm ipfw1 -does not supports address sets or lists of addresses. +does not support address sets or lists of addresses. .Pp .It Port specifications .Nm ipfw1