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Author SHA1 Message Date
Mike Pritchard
f7343bd74d Avoid the use of contractions. This eliminates the "its"/"it's" problems
pointed out by Rick Robinson.  Found and fixed some grammar problems
at the same time.

Note: the reason for avoiding contractions is two-fold:

1) It makes the text easier to understand for people who speak English
   as a second language.
2) Expanding the contractions often reveals poorly worded passages.
1996-12-31 21:54:24 +00:00
David E. O'Brien
1501622c6d Been reading more of Rodney HW emails. 1996-12-27 08:48:17 +00:00
David E. O'Brien
114090ef69 Cut and paste info about the 430VX chipset from some of Rodney's old
fbsd-hw emails.
1996-12-27 08:09:52 +00:00
David E. O'Brien
87ca4fd490 Added "ie. 430FX" for Triton and "ie. 430HX" for Triton-II.
(this is correct, right?  also, does anyone know what the 430VX
	chipset used in the ASUS P55TVP4 is?)
Intel's URL for the VS440FX has changed.
1996-12-27 07:14:11 +00:00
Jordan K. Hubbard
7e8009cf51 Phillips -> Philips
Noted-By: some really pedantic person. :)
1996-12-26 05:56:20 +00:00
Masafumi Max NAKANE
e5a6d9d571 Typo. 1996-12-10 07:11:57 +00:00
David E. O'Brien
8585b3f486 Documented Pentium clock speeds (CPU,ext mem,PCI) from a mail message
from Rodney Grimes.

Mentioned that you need 5MB to install FreeBSD, or 4MB if you use
boot4.flp.
1996-12-09 10:59:36 +00:00
Jordan K. Hubbard
f357ea3fbd *Ahem*. Plexstor, not plasmon.
Spotted-By:  Someone from Japan who's name I now forget (sorry!).
1996-12-05 03:30:59 +00:00
Mike Pritchard
0953bd9f6b Use the predefined entities for a couple of mailing lists. 1996-12-03 23:40:11 +00:00
Mike Pritchard
9869c40e7e Fix some spelling errors. 1996-11-30 23:51:49 +00:00
Jordan K. Hubbard
fce7b27895 Recommend my new Lieblingcdromlaufwerke, the Plasmon PX-12CS. 1996-11-27 01:06:40 +00:00
Alexander Langer
4e1ccbd25d Update URL for the Pentium Systems Hardware Performance Guide.
Closes PR#1918.

Submitted by:	David E. O'Brien <obrien@NUXI.cs.ucdavis.edu>
1996-10-29 03:28:04 +00:00
John Fieber
6cd1511da2 close pr 1509 1996-10-07 14:31:01 +00:00
John Fieber
b886cb676e Close pr 1474
Submitted by:	"David E. O'Brien" <obrien@Nuxi.cs.ucdavis.edu>
1996-10-07 14:25:44 +00:00
Wolfram Schneider
b6c00f9647 a bunch of spelling errors 1996-10-04 22:54:17 +00:00
Jordan K. Hubbard
7c1e1de62e Some comments from Darryl Okahata <darrylo@hpnmhjw.sr.hp.com> incorporated,
along with some much needed updates to other sections.
1996-10-01 05:28:20 +00:00
Wolfram Schneider
5adfa840ff add a.core entity for FreeBSD core team
use E-Mail entities if possible, except for 386BSD Patch kit section
1996-09-22 15:40:46 +00:00
Jordan K. Hubbard
f7f5923d6c Correct a bogon.
Submitted-by: jmb
1996-09-08 02:50:17 +00:00
Jordan K. Hubbard
b73620c976 Make some updates to the hardware guide, take some of Chuck Robey's comments
regarding the source syncing section (sss!).
1996-08-29 04:26:42 +00:00
Jordan K. Hubbard
f1ea42fb80 Try to bring this a little more up-to-date. 1996-08-27 03:55:55 +00:00
Jordan K. Hubbard
110dea8656 Add a section for CDR drives. 1996-08-24 10:18:50 +00:00
Jordan K. Hubbard
735c868348 Typo police.
Submitted-By: yoshiaki@kt.rim.or.jp
1996-08-18 17:04:41 +00:00
Peter Wemm
1afbbc7c59 Remove the quotes from some of the kernel options that dont need it.
eg:  options "SCSI_DELAY=15" should be options SCSI_DELAY=15, as config
knows about the "=" and splits it correctly into key=value for the #defines.
The only options that need quotes are those that have numbers as part of
the actual name, eg: "TUNE_1542" and "COMPAT_IBCS2".
1996-08-12 11:48:49 +00:00
Jordan K. Hubbard
16bcbad689 Add an Internet Hardware resources section and stick
"The Pentium Systems Hardware Performance Guide" which someone
posted today in there.
1996-08-07 00:39:06 +00:00
Joerg Wunsch
b8bf1c20f9 Various minor mod's to the tape drive section.
Discourage the use of the EXB-2501 by now, and slightly improve the
formatting for this entry.

Correct some minor oddities for the Tandberg entries based on my input
data.

Minor addition to the <!-- tech> section for QIC.
1996-07-20 18:42:25 +00:00
Alexander Langer
8f2a955a0d Put back reference to the Cyclades section which was recently removed
during a merge.
1996-07-16 00:15:53 +00:00
Jordan K. Hubbard
918c55882c o Update my "tips" section of the handbook.
o Create the goals section at last using some text of mine which
  James Raynard dug up someplace. :)
1996-07-15 19:31:47 +00:00
John Fieber
570e06f780 accross -> across.
& -> &amp;.
Remove references to imaginary freebsd-policy mailing list.
Submitted by:	John Mulhollen <JMULHOLLEN@gcwf.com>
		Thomas Graichen <graichen@axp5.physik.fu-berlin.de>
1996-07-12 16:18:50 +00:00
John Fieber
a3341c6330 Three little tweaks make this work, so put it back in. 1996-07-03 21:22:16 +00:00
Jordan K. Hubbard
2ea241a943 Revert this document - it didn't build (I should have checked) and I don't
have time to mess with it right now.
1996-07-03 01:40:29 +00:00
Jordan K. Hubbard
70dd5dab69 Jon Bresler's new hardware guide.
Submitted by:	jmb
1996-07-03 00:42:40 +00:00
Jordan K. Hubbard
808aa7aa51 Update Rod's comments on chipsets to include the Triton II. 1996-06-17 17:44:01 +00:00
Alexander Langer
b392d65041 Add Cyclades configuration section. 1996-06-07 15:56:40 +00:00
Jordan K. Hubbard
704e1889ab Whups! I never meant for the laptop section to appear twice! :-) 1996-06-01 21:28:06 +00:00
Mike Pritchard
97e8ea2c8d Fix the layout of one of the entries in the laptop section
so that it makes more sense.
1996-05-31 02:36:41 +00:00
Jordan K. Hubbard
5931e8535f Add laptop user's section to handbook.
Add Alex Nash.
1996-05-29 16:32:27 +00:00
Jordan K. Hubbard
d1dbf8f33d Add a new section for laptop users.
Update the mirrors list.
1996-05-22 19:13:59 +00:00
Mike Pritchard
09d44b1ef5 (This really shouldn't all be on one commit, but I forgot
I was in the middle of one of these "projects" when I started
on the next, so they wound up all intermixed)

Move the mailing list entities from authors.sgml to the new file
lists.sgml.  Add an entity for majordomo at the same time.

Avoid the use of contractions.  This revealed some grammer problems,
and also has the benefit of helping make things clearer for those people
who do make speak English as a their first language.
1996-05-16 23:18:28 +00:00
Mike Pritchard
239d617128 Add definitions for the various freebsd-* mailing lists so that
we are consistent in how they are referenced in the handbook, and
so that they are now all clickable URLs.  E.g. no more mis-matched
freebsd-hackers@freebsd.org and hackers@freebsd.org.  They are used
just like the individual mail addresses defined in authors.sgml.
E.g. &a.doc will expand to:

FreeBSD documentation project mailing list <freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG>

Be consistent in using the FreeBSD.ORG address.  All references
to freebsd.org were changed to FreeBSD.ORG.

Use pre-defined addresses for some individuals where available.
1996-05-09 23:04:53 +00:00
John Fieber
d2c6bd76e3 Remove some rogue section headings that jordan left way back in v1.9 in a
reorganization of the hw section.
1996-04-08 15:01:04 +00:00
Mike Pritchard
7d6b9e6c23 Updated some URL's for Digi International products so you can
actually follow the links, and change references from DigiBoard
to Digi International (I'm currently working for Digi, and we were
just asked to do the same thing with everything we are working
on when possible, so I figured I might as well do the same under FreeBSD).
1996-03-26 23:22:03 +00:00
John Fieber
c15ce264b4 Fix a variety of bogons.
Remember:
`&' is a magic character, use &amp;
`$' is a magic character (but shouldn't be), use &dollar;
use ``...'' instead of "..."
1996-02-27 15:57:51 +00:00
Jordan K. Hubbard
f8d3a3493d Three part commit:
1. Import UART technical description from Frank Durda IV
   <uhclem@nemesis.lonestar.org>.

2. Push existing sio chapter out of hw.sgml and make a separate
   document out of it.

3. Make hw.sgml include the first two under serial devices section.
Submitted by:	Frank Durda IV <uhclem@nemesis.lonestar.org> & I
1996-02-16 13:28:22 +00:00
Jordan K. Hubbard
2c80f9c5ff Update Stallion entry again. 1996-02-06 10:48:50 +00:00
Jordan K. Hubbard
04793c8b18 Correct single character typo in URL - argh! 1996-02-06 09:02:07 +00:00
Jordan K. Hubbard
40c4ab2135 Update my hardware section. Still waiting for more "Picks" configurations,
folks!  Am I to be the only hardware blow-hard in here? :-)
1996-02-01 07:31:47 +00:00
Mike Pritchard
739d6a140c Some more spelling fixes. 1996-01-31 14:26:20 +00:00
Jordan K. Hubbard
6db0bfd820 Information updates, typo patrol, rewrites. 1995-12-11 15:09:13 +00:00
Jordan K. Hubbard
d5e1227e5d Make a few more items "hot" 1995-12-03 00:17:57 +00:00
Jordan K. Hubbard
3b34e61a0a My reorganization of chapter 9.
Reviewed by:	jfieber
1995-11-25 20:00:49 +00:00