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Fix grammar nits.

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Bruce A. Mah 2003-07-29 21:20:44 +00:00
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release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.sgml
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<title>Network Protocols</title>
<para>&man.ipfw.4; rules now support comma-separated address lists
(like <literal>1.2.3.4, 5.6.7.8/30, 9.10.11.12/22</literal>),
and allows spaces after commas to make lists of addresses more readable.
(such as <literal>1.2.3.4, 5.6.7.8/30, 9.10.11.12/22</literal>),
and allow spaces after commas to make lists of addresses more readable.
&merged;</para>
<para>&man.ipfw.4; rules now support C++-style comment.
The comment is stored together with the rule and appears using
&man.ipfw.8; <literal>show</literal> command.
<para>&man.ipfw.4; rules now support C++-style comments.
Each comment is stored together with its rule and appears using
the &man.ipfw.8; <literal>show</literal> command.
&merged;</para>
<para>&man.ipfw.8; now allows to modify &man.ipfw.4; rules in set 31,
<para>&man.ipfw.8; can now modify &man.ipfw.4; rules in set 31,
which was read-only and used for the default rules.
They can be deleted by <command>ipfw delete set 31</command>
command but are not deleted
by <command>ipfw flush</command> command.
So this implements a flexible form of <quote>persistent
by the <command>ipfw flush</command> command.
This implements a flexible form of <quote>persistent
rules</quote>. More details can be found in &man.ipfw.8;.
&merged;</para>

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release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common/new.sgml
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<title>Network Protocols</title>
<para>&man.ipfw.4; rules now support comma-separated address lists
(like <literal>1.2.3.4, 5.6.7.8/30, 9.10.11.12/22</literal>),
and allows spaces after commas to make lists of addresses more readable.
(such as <literal>1.2.3.4, 5.6.7.8/30, 9.10.11.12/22</literal>),
and allow spaces after commas to make lists of addresses more readable.
&merged;</para>
<para>&man.ipfw.4; rules now support C++-style comment.
The comment is stored together with the rule and appears using
&man.ipfw.8; <literal>show</literal> command.
<para>&man.ipfw.4; rules now support C++-style comments.
Each comment is stored together with its rule and appears using
the &man.ipfw.8; <literal>show</literal> command.
&merged;</para>
<para>&man.ipfw.8; now allows to modify &man.ipfw.4; rules in set 31,
<para>&man.ipfw.8; can now modify &man.ipfw.4; rules in set 31,
which was read-only and used for the default rules.
They can be deleted by <command>ipfw delete set 31</command>
command but are not deleted
by <command>ipfw flush</command> command.
So this implements a flexible form of <quote>persistent
by the <command>ipfw flush</command> command.
This implements a flexible form of <quote>persistent
rules</quote>. More details can be found in &man.ipfw.8;.
&merged;</para>