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Fix some typos and grammar.

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PR:		docs/66770
Submitted by:	Michel Lavondès
MFC after:	3 days
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Ruslan Ermilov 2006-10-22 16:21:55 +00:00
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.\" $FreeBSD$
.\" $Whistle: ng_pppoe.8,v 1.1 1999/01/25 23:46:27 archie Exp $
.\"
.Dd August 9, 2006
.Dd October 22, 2006
.Dt NG_PPPOE 4
.Os
.Sh NAME
@ -101,10 +101,10 @@ This generic message returns a human-readable version of the node status.
(not yet)
.It Dv NGM_PPPOE_CONNECT
Tell a nominated newly created hook that its session should enter
the state machine in a manner to become a client.
the state machine as a client.
It must be newly created and
a service name can be given as an argument.
It is legal to specify a zero length service name.
It is legal to specify a zero-length service name.
This is common on some DSL setups.
A session request packet will be broadcast on the Ethernet.
This command uses the
@ -112,10 +112,10 @@ This command uses the
structure shown below.
.It Dv NGM_PPPOE_LISTEN
Tell a nominated newly created hook that its session should enter
the state machine in a manner to become a server listener.
the state machine as a server listener.
The argument
given is the name of the service to listen on behalf of
a zero length service length will match all requests for service.
given is the name of the service to listen for.
A zero-length service name will match all requests for service.
A matching service request
packet will be passed unmodified back to the process responsible
for starting the service.
@ -126,13 +126,13 @@ This command uses the
structure shown below.
.It Dv NGM_PPPOE_OFFER
Tell a nominated newly created hook that its session should enter
the state machine in a manner to become a server.
the state machine as a server.
The argument given is the name of the service to offer.
A zero length service
A zero-length service
is legal.
The State machine will progress to a state where it will await
a request packet to be forwarded to it from the startup server,
which in turn probably received it from a LISTEN mode hook ( see above).
which in turn probably received it from a LISTEN mode hook (see above).
This is so
that information that is required for the session that is embedded in
the original session request packet, is made available to the state machine
@ -159,14 +159,15 @@ above messages, and reports a state change.
This message reports successful Session negotiation.
It uses the structure shown below, and
reports back the hook name corresponding to the successful session.
.It Dv NGM_NGM_PPPOE_FAIL
.It Dv NGM_PPPOE_FAIL
This command is sent to the node that started this session with one of the
above messages, and reports a state change.
This message reports failed Session negotiation.
It uses the structure shown below, and
reports back the hook name corresponding to the failed session.
The hook will probably have been removed immediately after sending this message
.It Dv NGM_NGM_PPPOE_CLOSE
The hook will probably have been removed immediately after sending this
message.
.It Dv NGM_PPPOE_CLOSE
This command is sent to the node that started this session with one of the
above messages, and reports a state change.
This message reports a request to close a session.
@ -174,7 +175,9 @@ It uses the structure shown below, and
reports back the hook name corresponding to the closed session.
The hook will probably have been removed immediately after sending this
message.
At present this message is not yet used and a 'failed' message
At present this message is not yet used and a
.Dv NGM_PPPOE_FAIL
message
will be received at closure instead.
.It Dv NGM_PPPOE_ACNAME
This command is sent to the node that started this session with one of the