Miscellaneous edits. Mostly style, grammar, and punctuation fixes in

the vein of my previous, recent commits.

Updated release notes: Augmented sha(1)/rmd160(1) note, updated pf(4)
pseudo-users, retweaked doscmd note to reinstate a missing word I
deleted by accident [1] and add some more info.

MFCs noted:  ppp(8) LQM, ppp(8) set rad_alive.

Pointed out by:	"Eagle Eyes" ru [1]
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bmah 2004-08-13 15:09:20 +00:00
parent 6a48c2ea98
commit 28f803f8fb
2 changed files with 56 additions and 40 deletions

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@ -689,10 +689,10 @@
<para>The link state change notification of Ethernet media
support has been added to the routing socket.</para>
<para>The LQM, Link Quality Monitoring support of &man.ppp.8;
has been reimplemented. The LQM, which is described
in RFC 1989 allows PPP to keep track of the quality
of a running connection.</para>
<para>Link Quality Monitoring (LQM) support in &man.ppp.8;
has been reimplemented. LQM, which is described
in RFC 1989, allows PPP to keep track of the quality
of a running connection. &merged;</para>
<para>The following TCP features are now enabled by default: RFC
3042 (Limited Retransmit), RFC 3390 (increased initial
@ -956,7 +956,8 @@
<para>The <command>doscmd</command> utility has been
removed from the &os; base system. It is now available
the &os; Ports Collection instead.</para>
via the <filename role="package">emulators/doscmd</filename>
port in the &os; Ports Collection.</para>
<para>&man.dump.8; and &man.restore.8; now support
a <option>-P</option> option to specify backup methods
@ -1103,13 +1104,13 @@
file.</para>
<para>&man.newsyslog.8; now uses a new order when processing
files to rotate. The order first rotate all files that need
to be rotated, and then send a single signal to each process
which needs to be signaled, and finally it will compress
all the files which were rotated.</para>
files to rotate. It first rotates all files that need
to be rotated, then sends a single signal to each process
which needs to be signaled, and finally compresses
all the files that were rotated.</para>
<para>&man.nextwctype.3; function to iterate over all characters
in a particular character class,
<para>A &man.nextwctype.3; function to iterate over all characters
in a particular character class
has been added.</para>
<para>Initial support for UTF-8 versions of all the currently
@ -1139,7 +1140,7 @@
&man.syslogd.8;.</para>
<para>&man.nologin.8; has been moved from <filename>/sbin/nologin</filename>
to <filename>/usr/sbin/nologin</filename>, and
to <filename>/usr/sbin/nologin</filename>.
<filename>/sbin/nologin</filename> remains as a symbolic link
for backward compatibility.</para>
@ -1158,7 +1159,7 @@
and a <option>-N</option> option to extract the name list from
the specified system instead of the default kernel.</para>
<para>The &man.ppp.8; now support a <quote>set rad_alive
<para>The userland &man.ppp.8; implementation now supports a <quote>set rad_alive
<replaceable>N</replaceable></quote> command
to enable periodic RADIUS accounting information
being sent to the RADIUS server.</para>
@ -1222,10 +1223,12 @@
<para>&man.sed.1; <literal>y</literal> (translate) command
now supports multibyte characters.</para>
<para>&man.sha1.1; and &man.rmd160.1; utility have been added.
<para>The &man.sha1.1; and &man.rmd160.1; utilities have been added.
Similar to &man.md5.1;, they calculate a message digest of their
inputs.
&merged;</para>
<para>&man.smbmsg.8;, a small utility to send/receive SMBus messages
<para>&man.smbmsg.8;, a small utility to send/receive SMBus messages,
has been added.</para>
<para arch="sparc64">&man.sunlabel.8; now supports two new flags:
@ -1377,13 +1380,18 @@
<para><application>pf</application>, OpenBSD's packet filter as of
OpenBSD 3.5, has been imported into &os; source tree and is now installed
by default. A new user <username>proxy</username>, and two new
groups <username>authpf</username> and <username>proxy</username>,
which <application>pf</application> needs, are added as well.</para>
by default. Two new users (<username>proxy</username> and
<username>_pflogd</username>) and three new
groups (<username>authpf</username>, <username>proxy</username>,
and <username>_pflogd</username>),
which <application>pf</application> needs, have been added as well.</para>
<note>
<para>On upgrading from the source, these user accounts must be
added in advance. The <varname>NO_PF</varname> variable
<para>On upgrading from source, these user accounts must be
added in advance. <literal>mergemaster -p</literal> can be
used to assist in creating the proper entries in the
&man.passwd.5; and &man.group.5; files.
The <varname>NO_PF</varname> variable
in <filename>make.conf</filename> can be used to prevent
<application>pf</application> from building.</para>
</note>

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<para>The link state change notification of Ethernet media
support has been added to the routing socket.</para>
<para>The LQM, Link Quality Monitoring support of &man.ppp.8;
has been reimplemented. The LQM, which is described
in RFC 1989 allows PPP to keep track of the quality
of a running connection.</para>
<para>Link Quality Monitoring (LQM) support in &man.ppp.8;
has been reimplemented. LQM, which is described
in RFC 1989, allows PPP to keep track of the quality
of a running connection. &merged;</para>
<para>The following TCP features are now enabled by default: RFC
3042 (Limited Retransmit), RFC 3390 (increased initial
@ -956,7 +956,8 @@
<para>The <command>doscmd</command> utility has been
removed from the &os; base system. It is now available
the &os; Ports Collection instead.</para>
via the <filename role="package">emulators/doscmd</filename>
port in the &os; Ports Collection.</para>
<para>&man.dump.8; and &man.restore.8; now support
a <option>-P</option> option to specify backup methods
@ -1103,13 +1104,13 @@
file.</para>
<para>&man.newsyslog.8; now uses a new order when processing
files to rotate. The order first rotate all files that need
to be rotated, and then send a single signal to each process
which needs to be signaled, and finally it will compress
all the files which were rotated.</para>
files to rotate. It first rotates all files that need
to be rotated, then sends a single signal to each process
which needs to be signaled, and finally compresses
all the files that were rotated.</para>
<para>&man.nextwctype.3; function to iterate over all characters
in a particular character class,
<para>A &man.nextwctype.3; function to iterate over all characters
in a particular character class
has been added.</para>
<para>Initial support for UTF-8 versions of all the currently
@ -1139,7 +1140,7 @@
&man.syslogd.8;.</para>
<para>&man.nologin.8; has been moved from <filename>/sbin/nologin</filename>
to <filename>/usr/sbin/nologin</filename>, and
to <filename>/usr/sbin/nologin</filename>.
<filename>/sbin/nologin</filename> remains as a symbolic link
for backward compatibility.</para>
@ -1158,7 +1159,7 @@
and a <option>-N</option> option to extract the name list from
the specified system instead of the default kernel.</para>
<para>The &man.ppp.8; now support a <quote>set rad_alive
<para>The userland &man.ppp.8; implementation now supports a <quote>set rad_alive
<replaceable>N</replaceable></quote> command
to enable periodic RADIUS accounting information
being sent to the RADIUS server.</para>
@ -1222,10 +1223,12 @@
<para>&man.sed.1; <literal>y</literal> (translate) command
now supports multibyte characters.</para>
<para>&man.sha1.1; and &man.rmd160.1; utility have been added.
<para>The &man.sha1.1; and &man.rmd160.1; utilities have been added.
Similar to &man.md5.1;, they calculate a message digest of their
inputs.
&merged;</para>
<para>&man.smbmsg.8;, a small utility to send/receive SMBus messages
<para>&man.smbmsg.8;, a small utility to send/receive SMBus messages,
has been added.</para>
<para arch="sparc64">&man.sunlabel.8; now supports two new flags:
@ -1377,13 +1380,18 @@
<para><application>pf</application>, OpenBSD's packet filter as of
OpenBSD 3.5, has been imported into &os; source tree and is now installed
by default. A new user <username>proxy</username>, and two new
groups <username>authpf</username> and <username>proxy</username>,
which <application>pf</application> needs, are added as well.</para>
by default. Two new users (<username>proxy</username> and
<username>_pflogd</username>) and three new
groups (<username>authpf</username>, <username>proxy</username>,
and <username>_pflogd</username>),
which <application>pf</application> needs, have been added as well.</para>
<note>
<para>On upgrading from the source, these user accounts must be
added in advance. The <varname>NO_PF</varname> variable
<para>On upgrading from source, these user accounts must be
added in advance. <literal>mergemaster -p</literal> can be
used to assist in creating the proper entries in the
&man.passwd.5; and &man.group.5; files.
The <varname>NO_PF</varname> variable
in <filename>make.conf</filename> can be used to prevent
<application>pf</application> from building.</para>
</note>