Use <replaceable></replaceable> elements where appropriate for floppy

disk names.

"Approximately three...floppies" is kind of weird to me, so substitute
"several" here instead.  We already mention that a floppy disk set
requires three disks elsewhere, so we're not really losing any
content.
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@ -147,12 +147,12 @@ from {alpha,i386}/INSTALL.TXT.
<para arch="i386,alpha">For most CDROM or network installations, all you need to
copy onto actual floppies from the <filename>floppies/</filename> directory are the
<filename>boot.flp</filename> and <filename>kernX.flp</filename>
<filename>boot.flp</filename> and <filename>kern<replaceable>X</replaceable>.flp</filename>
images (for 1.44MB floppies).</para>
<para arch="pc98">For a normal CDROM or network installation, all you need
to copy onto actual floppies from the <filename>floppies/</filename>
directory are the <filename>boot.flp</filename> and <filename>kernX.flp</filename>
directory are the <filename>boot.flp</filename> and <filename>kern<replaceable>X</replaceable>.flp</filename>
images (for 1.44MB floppies) or <filename>boot-small.flp</filename> and
<filename>kern-small.flp</filename> images (for 1.2MB floppies).</para>
@ -160,7 +160,7 @@ from {alpha,i386}/INSTALL.TXT.
the
<replaceable>release</replaceable><filename>/floppies/boot.flp</filename>,
and all of the
<replaceable>release</replaceable><filename>/floppies/kernX.flp</filename>
<replaceable>release</replaceable><filename>/floppies/kern<replaceable>X</replaceable>.flp</filename>
files from <ulink
url="&release.url;"></ulink>
or one of the many mirrors listed at <ulink
@ -169,8 +169,8 @@ from {alpha,i386}/INSTALL.TXT.
<ulink url="http://mirrorlist.FreeBSD.org/"></ulink> Web pages.
</para>
<para arch="i386,alpha">Get approximately three blank, freshly formatted floppies and image copy
<filename>boot.flp</filename> onto one and the <filename>kernX.flp</filename> files
<para arch="i386,alpha">Get several blank, freshly formatted floppies and image copy
<filename>boot.flp</filename> onto one and the <filename>kern<replaceable>X</replaceable>.flp</filename> files
onto the others. These images are
<emphasis>not</emphasis> DOS files. You cannot simply copy them to a DOS or UFS floppy
as regular files, you need to <quote>image</quote> copy them to the floppy with
@ -178,8 +178,8 @@ from {alpha,i386}/INSTALL.TXT.
<filename>tools</filename> directory on your CDROM or &os; FTP
mirror) or the &man.dd.1; command in UNIX.</para>
<para arch="pc98">Get approximately three blank, freshly formatted floppies and image copy
<filename>boot.flp</filename> onto one and the <filename>kernX.flp</filename> files
<para arch="pc98">Get several blank, freshly formatted floppies and image copy
<filename>boot.flp</filename> onto one and the <filename>kern<replaceable>X</replaceable>.flp</filename> files
onto the others. These images are
<emphasis>not</emphasis> DOS files. You cannot simply copy them to a DOS or UFS floppy
as regular files, you need to <quote>image</quote> copy them to the floppy with
@ -194,10 +194,10 @@ from {alpha,i386}/INSTALL.TXT.
<screen arch="pc98"><prompt>A></prompt> <userinput>rawrite</userinput></screen>
<para arch="i386,alpha">Assuming that you'd copied <filename>fdimage.exe</filename> and <filename>boot.flp</filename> into a directory
somewhere. You would do the same for the <filename>kernX.flp</filename> files, of course.</para>
somewhere. You would do the same for the <filename>kern<replaceable>X</replaceable>.flp</filename> files, of course.</para>
<para arch="pc98">Assuming that you'd copied <filename>rawrite.exe</filename> and <filename>boot.flp</filename> into a directory
somewhere. You would do the same for the <filename>kernX.flp</filename> files, of course.</para>
somewhere. You would do the same for the <filename>kern<replaceable>X</replaceable>.flp</filename> files, of course.</para>
<para arch="i386,alpha,pc98">If you're creating the boot floppy from a UNIX machine, you
may find that:</para>
@ -273,7 +273,7 @@ from {alpha,i386}/INSTALL.TXT.
you should start the installation by building
a set of &os; boot floppies from the files
<filename>floppies/boot.flp</filename> and
<filename>floppies/kernX.flp</filename> using the instructions
<filename>floppies/kern<replaceable>X</replaceable>.flp</filename> using the instructions
found in <xref linkend="floppies">. Restart your computer using
the <filename>boot.flp</filename> disk; when prompted, insert
the other disks as required. Then, please go to
@ -285,7 +285,7 @@ from {alpha,i386}/INSTALL.TXT.
you should start the installation by building
a set of &os; boot floppies from the files
<filename>floppies/boot.flp</filename> and
<filename>floppies/kernX.flp</filename> using the instructions
<filename>floppies/kern<replaceable>X</replaceable>.flp</filename> using the instructions
found in <xref linkend="floppies">. Restart your computer using
the <filename>boot.flp</filename> disk; when prompted, insert
the other disks as required. Then, please go to
@ -307,7 +307,7 @@ from {alpha,i386}/INSTALL.TXT.
from floppy disk. You should start the installation by building
a set of &os; boot floppies from the
<filename>floppies/boot.flp</filename> and
<filename>floppies/kernX.flp</filename> files using the instructions
<filename>floppies/kern<replaceable>X</replaceable>.flp</filename> files using the instructions
found in <xref linkend="floppies">. From the SRM console prompt
(<literal>&gt;&gt;&gt;</literal>), just insert the
<filename>boot.flp</filename> floppy and type the following
@ -835,10 +835,10 @@ pqb0.0.1.4.0 PQB0 PCI EIDE</screen>
</step>
<step>
<para>If booting from floppies, when access to the disk stops, insert
the first of the <filename>kernX.flp</filename> disks and press
the first of the <filename>kern<replaceable>X</replaceable>.flp</filename> disks and press
<keycap>Enter</keycap>. When access to this disk finishes, insert
the next <filename>kernX.flp</filename> disk and press <keycap>Enter</keycap>,
and repeat until all <filename>kernX.flp</filename> disks have been
the next <filename>kern<replaceable>X</replaceable>.flp</filename> disk and press <keycap>Enter</keycap>,
and repeat until all <filename>kern<replaceable>X</replaceable>.flp</filename> disks have been
inserted. When disk activity finishes, reinsert the <filename>boot.flp</filename>
floppy disk and press <keycap>Enter</keycap>.</para>
</step>