diff --git a/share/man/man9/rmlock.9 b/share/man/man9/rmlock.9
index 893eb2534f05..78083458072b 100644
--- a/share/man/man9/rmlock.9
+++ b/share/man/man9/rmlock.9
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@
 .\" $FreeBSD$
 .\"
 .\" Based on rwlock.9 man page
-.Dd November 16, 2011
+.Dd June 8, 2012
 .Dt RMLOCK 9
 .Os
 .Sh NAME
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@
 .Nm rm_wunlock ,
 .Nm rm_wowned ,
 .Nm RM_SYSINIT
-.Nd kernel reader/writer lock optimized for mostly read access patterns
+.Nd kernel reader/writer lock optimized for read-mostly access patterns
 .Sh SYNOPSIS
 .In sys/param.h
 .In sys/lock.h
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@
 .In sys/kernel.h
 .Fn RM_SYSINIT "name" "struct rmlock *rm" "const char *desc" "int opts"
 .Sh DESCRIPTION
-Mostly reader locks allow shared access to protected data by multiple threads,
+Read-mostly locks allow shared access to protected data by multiple threads,
 or exclusive access by a single thread.
 The threads with shared access are known as
 .Em readers
@@ -76,83 +76,82 @@ A thread with exclusive access is known as a
 .Em writer
 since it can modify protected data.
 .Pp
-Read mostly locks are designed to be efficient for locks almost exclusively
+Read-mostly locks are designed to be efficient for locks almost exclusively
 used as reader locks and as such should be used for protecting data that
 rarely changes.
-Acquiring an exclusive lock after the lock had been locked for shared access
+Acquiring an exclusive lock after the lock has been locked for shared access
 is an expensive operation.
 .Pp
-Although reader/writer locks look very similar to
-.Xr sx 9
-locks, their usage pattern is different.
-Reader/writer locks can be treated as mutexes (see
-.Xr mutex 9 )
-with shared/exclusive semantics unless initialized with
-.Dv RM_SLEEPABLE .
+Normal read-mostly locks are similar to
+.Xr rwlock 9
+locks and follow the same lock ordering rules as
+.Xr rwlock 9
+locks.
+Read-mostly locks have full priority propagation like mutexes.
 Unlike
-.Xr sx 9 ,
-an
-.Nm
-can be locked while holding a non-spin mutex, and an
-.Nm
-cannot be held while sleeping, again unless initialized with
-.Dv RM_SLEEPABLE .
-The
-.Nm
-locks have full priority propagation like mutexes.
-The
+.Xr rwlock 9 ,
+read-mostly locks propagate priority to both readers and writers.
+This is implemented via the
 .Va rm_priotracker
-structure argument supplied in
+structure argument supplied to
 .Fn rm_rlock
 and
-.Fn rm_runlock
-is used to keep track of the read owner(s).
-Another important property is that shared holders of
-.Nm
-can recurse if the lock has been initialized with the
-.Dv LO_RECURSABLE
-option, however exclusive locks are not allowed to recurse.
+.Fn rm_runlock .
+Readers can recurse if the lock is initialized with the
+.Dv RM_RECURSE
+option;
+however, writers are never allowed to recurse.
+.Pp
+Sleepable read-mostly locks are created by passing
+.Dv RM_SLEEPABLE
+to
+.Fn rm_init_flags .
+Unlike normal read-mostly locks,
+sleepable read-mostly locks follow the same lock ordering rules as
+.Xr sx 9
+locks.
+Sleepable read-mostly locks do not propagate priority to writers,
+but they do propagate priority to readers.
+Writers are permitted to sleep while holding a read-mostly lock,
+but readers are not.
+Unlike other sleepable locks such as
+.Xr sx 9
+locks,
+readers must use try operations on other sleepable locks to avoid sleeping.
 .Ss Macros and Functions
 .Bl -tag -width indent
 .It Fn rm_init "struct rmlock *rm" "const char *name"
-Initialize structure located at
-.Fa rm
-as mostly reader lock, described by
-.Fa name .
-The name description is used solely for debugging purposes.
+Initialize the read-mostly lock
+.Fa rm .
+The
+.Fa name
+description is used solely for debugging purposes.
 This function must be called before any other operations
 on the lock.
 .It Fn rm_init_flags "struct rmlock *rm" "const char *name" "int opts"
-Initialize the rm lock just like the
-.Fn rm_init
-function, but specifying a set of optional flags to alter the
-behaviour of
-.Fa rm ,
-through the
+Similar to
+.Fn rm_init ,
+initialize the read-mostly lock
+.Fa rm
+with a set of optional flags.
+The
 .Fa opts
-argument.
-It contains one or more of the following flags:
+arguments contains one or more of the following flags:
 .Bl -tag -width ".Dv RM_NOWITNESS"
 .It Dv RM_NOWITNESS
 Instruct
 .Xr witness 4
 to ignore this lock.
 .It Dv RM_RECURSE
-Allow threads to recursively acquire exclusive locks for
+Allow threads to recursively acquire shared locks for
 .Fa rm .
 .It Dv RM_SLEEPABLE
-Allow writers to sleep while holding the lock.
-Readers must not sleep while holding the lock and can avoid to sleep on
-taking the lock by using
-.Fn rm_try_rlock
-instead of
-.Fn rm_rlock .
+Create a sleepable read-mostly lock.
 .El
 .It Fn rm_rlock "struct rmlock *rm" "struct rm_priotracker* tracker"
 Lock
 .Fa rm
-as a reader.
-Using
+as a reader using
 .Fa tracker
 to track read owners of a lock for priority propagation.
 This data structure is only used internally by
@@ -161,28 +160,32 @@ and must persist until
 .Fn rm_runlock
 has been called.
 This data structure can be allocated on the stack since
-rmlocks cannot be held while sleeping.
+readers cannot sleep.
 If any thread holds this lock exclusively, the current thread blocks,
 and its priority is propagated to the exclusive holder.
 If the lock was initialized with the
-.Dv LO_RECURSABLE
+.Dv RM_RECURSE
 option the
 .Fn rm_rlock
-function can be called when the thread has already acquired reader
+function can be called when the current thread has already acquired reader
 access on
 .Fa rm .
-This is called
-.Dq "recursing on a lock" .
 .It Fn rm_try_rlock "struct rmlock *rm" "struct rm_priotracker* tracker"
 Try to lock
 .Fa rm
 as a reader.
 .Fn rm_try_rlock
 will return 0 if the lock cannot be acquired immediately;
-otherwise the lock will be acquired and a non-zero value will be returned.
+otherwise,
+the lock will be acquired and a non-zero value will be returned.
 Note that
 .Fn rm_try_rlock
 may fail even while the lock is not currently held by a writer.
+If the lock was initialized with the
+.Dv RM_RECURSE
+option,
+.Fn rm_try_rlock
+will succeed if the current thread has already acquired reader access.
 .It Fn rm_wlock "struct rmlock *rm"
 Lock
 .Fa rm