Improve grammar.

PR:		200673
Submitted by:	Fabian Keil
Obtained from:	ElectroBSD
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brueffer 2015-06-11 23:05:49 +00:00
parent 750b155101
commit d837fde034

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.\" $FreeBSD$
.\"
.Dd April 18, 2012
.Dd June 11, 2015
.Dt GMULTIPATH 8
.Os
.Sh NAME
@ -253,13 +253,13 @@ This I/O continues until an I/O is returned with
a generic I/O error or a "Nonexistent Device" error.
When this occurs, that path is marked FAIL, the next path
in a list is selected as active and the failed I/O reissued.
In Active/Active mode all paths not marked FAIL may handle I/O same time.
In Active/Active mode all paths not marked FAIL may handle I/O at the same time.
Requests are distributed between paths to equalize load.
For capable devices it allows to utilize bandwidth of all paths.
In Active/Read mode all paths not marked FAIL may handle reads same time,
but unlike Active/Active only one path handles write requests at any
For capable devices it allows to utilize the bandwidth of all paths.
In Active/Read mode all paths not marked FAIL may handle reads at the same time,
but unlike in Active/Active mode only one path handles write requests at any
point in time.
It allows to closer follow original write request order if above layer
It allows to closer follow the original write request order if the layer above
needs it for data consistency (not waiting for requisite write completion
before sending dependent write).
.Pp
@ -269,9 +269,9 @@ GEOM class is given an opportunity to taste these new devices.
If a new
device has a
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on-disk metadata label, the device is used to either create a new
on-disk metadata label, the device is either used to create a new
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GEOM, or been added the list of paths for an existing
GEOM, or added the list of paths for an existing
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GEOM.
.Pp
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.Xr mpt 4
based Fibre Channel disk devices.
For these devices, when a device disappears
(due e.g., to a cable pull or power failure to a switch), the device is
(due to e.g., a cable pull or power failure to a switch), the device is
proactively marked as gone and I/O to it failed.
This causes the
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