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Author SHA1 Message Date
Mike Pritchard
f7343bd74d Avoid the use of contractions. This eliminates the "its"/"it's" problems
pointed out by Rick Robinson.  Found and fixed some grammar problems
at the same time.

Note: the reason for avoiding contractions is two-fold:

1) It makes the text easier to understand for people who speak English
   as a second language.
2) Expanding the contractions often reveals poorly worded passages.
1996-12-31 21:54:24 +00:00
Jordan K. Hubbard
4d28b322e3 Add Decision-Computer Intl cards to list of supported serial cards.
Submitted-By: jhs
1996-12-21 15:01:07 +00:00
Jordan K. Hubbard
715f4f2230 Add more miscellaneous devices
Remove bogus example text.
1996-12-19 21:39:07 +00:00
Jordan K. Hubbard
f7d27d933d Remove bogus references to root.flp in the installation guide (strange
coincidence - this was the very next item on my TODO list, huzzah!  Thanks,
Doug - I don't usually get them checked off so fast! :-).  Also change
XCOPY command example to match new realities.

Submitted-By: Doug White <dwhite@resnet.uoregon.edu>
1996-12-19 00:43:27 +00:00
John Fieber
33a5a54381 Syntax tweak.
The breakage is actually a subtle bug in the DTD, but fixing it may
have some other ugly implications that need to be explored first.
1996-11-29 20:04:11 +00:00
Jordan K. Hubbard
87edac95ef Note unpleasant interaction between rawrite.exe and various flavors
of Windows.
1996-11-29 03:33:27 +00:00
John Hay
d58e2ca341 Change my address to be more universal.
Add a note about our support for the SDL RISCom/N2 and N2pci cards.
2.2 candidate.
1996-11-04 17:21:20 +00:00
Wolfram Schneider
e627b39bac delete doubled words, e.g.: "the the" -> "the" 1996-10-05 18:37:31 +00:00
Wolfram Schneider
b6c00f9647 a bunch of spelling errors 1996-10-04 22:54:17 +00:00
Jordan K. Hubbard
0db7abdd72 Note that EtherPower 2 is supported.
Submitted-By: Doug White <dwhite@gdi.uoregon.edu>
1996-09-21 17:51:46 +00:00
Jordan K. Hubbard
99949bf4d9 Mention the fact that HP NICs are now supported.
Submitted-by: "A JOSEPH KOSHY <koshy@india.hp.com> "
1996-09-09 03:57:49 +00:00
Satoshi Asami
45a74d8128 Use "(the) X Window System" consistently, not X-Window or lowercase
variants.

Submitted by:	Hanai Hiroyuki <hanai@astec.co.jp>
1996-08-28 00:44:00 +00:00
John Fieber
c6c4e8b6d9 Define a new entity to hold the latest *released* FreeBSD version number.
In the text, use &rel.current; instead of 2.1.5.
1996-08-09 15:33:31 +00:00
John Fieber
df91b474fb The install docs pointed to th 2.1.0 distribution, not 2.1.5. OOPS!
Submitted by:	Brett Glass <brett@lariat.org>
1996-07-25 13:12:25 +00:00
Bruce Evans
f441029838 Updated boot message. 1996-07-01 16:32:09 +00:00
Jordan K. Hubbard
1b234ea35b Clarify PCMCIA warning now that we have the PCCARD stuff in our -current tree. 1996-05-23 11:53:56 +00:00
Mike Pritchard
09d44b1ef5 (This really shouldn't all be on one commit, but I forgot
I was in the middle of one of these "projects" when I started
on the next, so they wound up all intermixed)

Move the mailing list entities from authors.sgml to the new file
lists.sgml.  Add an entity for majordomo at the same time.

Avoid the use of contractions.  This revealed some grammer problems,
and also has the benefit of helping make things clearer for those people
who do make speak English as a their first language.
1996-05-16 23:18:28 +00:00
Jordan K. Hubbard
a34162e6e8 Make some long-overdue updates in the install document, add
freebsd-emulation list to entities.
1996-05-16 20:20:57 +00:00
Jordan K. Hubbard
56e465434a Bring this a little more up to date. 1996-05-16 20:01:26 +00:00
Mike Pritchard
239d617128 Add definitions for the various freebsd-* mailing lists so that
we are consistent in how they are referenced in the handbook, and
so that they are now all clickable URLs.  E.g. no more mis-matched
freebsd-hackers@freebsd.org and hackers@freebsd.org.  They are used
just like the individual mail addresses defined in authors.sgml.
E.g. &a.doc will expand to:

FreeBSD documentation project mailing list <freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG>

Be consistent in using the FreeBSD.ORG address.  All references
to freebsd.org were changed to FreeBSD.ORG.

Use pre-defined addresses for some individuals where available.
1996-05-09 23:04:53 +00:00
Jordan K. Hubbard
49e224d1b9 Fix DC21040/DC21041/DC21140 doc bogon.
Submitted by:	Michael Smith <msmith@atrad.adelaide.edu.au>
1996-03-20 10:38:53 +00:00
John Fieber
c15ce264b4 Fix a variety of bogons.
Remember:
`&' is a magic character, use &amp;
`$' is a magic character (but shouldn't be), use &dollar;
use ``...'' instead of "..."
1996-02-27 15:57:51 +00:00
Mike Pritchard
367b84d5ce Fix some grammar problems (mainly its/it's stuff). 1996-01-31 19:03:02 +00:00
Mike Pritchard
739d6a140c Some more spelling fixes. 1996-01-31 14:26:20 +00:00
John Fieber
f161152000 Add Compex CPXPCI/32C to the supported NICs.
Submitted by:	Glen Foster <gfoster@gfoster.com>
1995-12-21 16:10:22 +00:00
John Fieber
29397ffde5 Gobs of small tweaks and cleanups.
Submitted by:	Philippe Charnier <charnier@lirmm.fr>
1995-12-04 17:58:52 +00:00
Thomas Gellekum
490dd8738b Fix a few typos 1995-11-29 09:45:13 +00:00
John Fieber
9b1ae6a7f3 Typo. 1995-11-27 01:46:51 +00:00
Jordan K. Hubbard
f2e2018809 Various tweaks to things I noticed while reading these docs. 1995-11-24 07:55:27 +00:00
John Fieber
c89d9c5a91 Bring 2.1 changes back into the head. 1995-11-20 01:10:33 +00:00
John Fieber
3607ca745e Lots of tweaks.
Submitted by:	Joerg Wunsch <joerg_wunsch@uriah.heep.sax.de>
1995-10-22 00:42:14 +00:00
John Fieber
866c7a8f02 Clean up entries for supported CD-ROM drives.
Submitted by:	Frank Durda IV <uhclem%nemesis@fw.ast.com>
1995-10-18 04:05:16 +00:00
John Fieber
baf849c9b0 Two new sections:
* Kernel configuration, from Jake Hamby <jehamby@lightside.com>
    I'd like as many people as possible to give this one a good
    check before 2.1 goes out the door.

  * Routing, from Coranth Gryphon <gryphon@healer.com>

A bazillion formatting tweaks (only 13 bazillion more to go!)
1995-10-07 04:32:03 +00:00
Jean-Marc Zucconi
d745bece54 Fix typos.
Reviewed by:	/usr/local/bin/ispell
1995-09-27 00:46:30 +00:00
John Fieber
6c45f39e40 Incorrect model number for BOCA multiport card corrected.
Submitted by:	"Adrian T. Filipi-Martin" <atf3r@agate.cs.virginia.edu>
1995-09-26 17:47:02 +00:00
John Fieber
becb43fcf4 * Make author's email address come out as mailto url's in HTML.
* Import my "Installation for the Impatient" to the install section.

* Move Booting and memory use into a "Tech Topics" chapter; add
  DMA information. (Frank Durda IV)

* Bring in ESDI section.  (Wilko Bulte)

* Bring in MD5/DES section.  (Garrett Wollman)

* Fix a couple problems with LaTeX output.
1995-09-25 04:53:33 +00:00
John Fieber
1279901cec Clean up assorted formatting glitches. Mostly associated with missing
<header> tags.
1995-08-29 01:42:52 +00:00
John Fieber
3630e84e6b Another minor correction about Adaptec controllers.
Submitted by:	"Justin T. Gibbs" <gibbs@FreeBSD.org>
1995-08-26 03:09:12 +00:00
John Fieber
4f4923250f Fixed a small omission:
<item>Adaptec 274X/284X/2940 (Narrow/Wide/Twin)
	      series ISA/EISA/VLB/PCI SCSI controllers
                              ^^^
Submitted by:	"Justin T. Gibbs" <gibbs@FreeBSD.org>
1995-08-25 23:51:08 +00:00
John Fieber
fd75b875db Correct some misinformation about using the MS-DOS xcopy command.
Fix some english syntax errors.  (More corrections needed)
Submitted by:	Kristyn Fayette <kristyn@gnu.ai.mit.edu>
1995-07-17 20:24:09 +00:00
John Fieber
f2e8a51a7b Make a note of the minimum RAM requirements for FreeBSD. 1995-07-16 17:06:22 +00:00
John Fieber
03f32f4020 Add a cross reference target for "Supported Configurations". 1995-07-14 21:44:31 +00:00
John Fieber
c654cad5b7 Fix a couple formatting glitches.
Fix a couple cross references.
1995-07-06 14:25:01 +00:00
John Fieber
1e30867d53 Start populating the handbook with useful cross reference targets.
All cross reference labels start with name of the file that contains
them.  A label for the top section level is simply the name of the
file (omitting the .sgml).  Other references within the file append a
colon and onother name.  For example, the label on the mailing list
section in the file eresources.sgml is eresources:mail.  This gives
each file its own cross reference namespace.
1995-06-30 17:37:53 +00:00
John Fieber
017b6c4995 New sections added: release notes, installation, kernel debugging.
Numerous other edits.  Empty sections now have an * in the section header.
1995-06-14 18:38:56 +00:00